You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

#job #week #employer #situation

Dear SIR or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I have been appointed to start my new job at your company from next

week

, but unfortunately, I can not join next

week

due to

an accident. After attending a party

last

night, I was coming back home and at that time, faced an accident with a car. Because of the collision, my one hand got injured and the doctor suggested I rest for one

week

to get faster remedies. I am not able to walk properly, even though it would be hard to travel office from the house. Kindly request you to give me some time to start my job and allow me to join the work after a

week

of next

week

. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Ankit

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Coherence and Cohesion

Try to merge sentences or use more cohesive devices to make your paragraphs flow better.

Task Achievement

Include more details about your recovery plan to demonstrate clear planning.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your greeting and closing are appropriate and polite.

Task Achievement

The tone of your letter is professional and respectful.

Word Count

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

136 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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