The two diagrams below describe changes to a museum's floor plan between 2008 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two diagrams below describe changes to a museum's floor plan between 2008 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps provide key information about the changes that have taken place in the museum's
floor
in 2008 and 2012.
Overall
, it is clear from the maps that the museum has undergone a substantial redevelopment, with several features either relocated or transformed.
In addition
, the 2008 layout showed an uncomplicated design,
whereas
, in 2012, it stood out for a noticeable transformation with a more functional and diverse layout.
According to
what is shown, in 2008, the entrance started from the left and a gallery room was alongside it. The stairs were in the middle of the museum between the shop and cloakroom on the first ground,
while
in the second there was a reception opposite the reading area. In terms of the 2012 layout, 2 floors were built, and the stairs turned into a lift. The first
floor
remained almost the same, but the children's play area was constructed beside the shop. On the second
floor
, the cloak was relocated to the same place as the reception. Third-
floor
the
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were introduced. The exhibition area was repositioned on the fourth
floor
.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words floor with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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