The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The following bar chart and table illustrate the financial assistance obtained by four nations and the allocation of funds in 1974 and 2014.
Overall
, the data indicates a shift in monetary support from the finance sector to the medicine sphere over the 40-year period.
Additionally
, all four countries experienced a reduction in the amount of financial
aid
received in 2014 compared to 1974, with China seeing the most significant decrease. In 1974, the funding for catering was about 70
million
, which fell to
the
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15
million
in 2014. Support for medicine
droped
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dropped
from 80
million
in 1974 to 60
million
in 2014.
Also
, financial support for finance saw a gradual downfall, from 70
million
in 1974 to 65
million
in 2014. China received 62
million
in
aid
in 1974, which dropped dramatically to 6
million
in 2014. Indonesia's
aid
went down from 55
million
in 1974 to 30
million
in 2014. Thailand’s
aid
reduced
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from 48
million
in 1974 to 18
million
in 2014. South Africa received 65
million
in 1974, decreasing to 42
million
in 2014.
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