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The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the results of a survey of people's perception of celebrity news coverage.. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table
illiterates
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 the results of a study of
people
’s perception of
celebrity
news
coverage
.
Overall
, it is obvious that higher percentages of
people
 think that famous
people
 get too much
news
coverage
 and TV
news
 provides the highest ratio of
celebrity
news
.
According to
 the provided data, 85% of
people
 believe that celebrities get more
news
coverage
 than they deserve.
Had
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7% of
such
news
 followers say that the
coverage
 happens at the right amount
while
 almost a similar percentage of viewers believe that the
coverage
 is not enough. In terms of
celebrity
news
coverage
 responsibilities, more than half of the audience
believe
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 that
news
 organisations are responsible for that.
In addition
, the public takes 34% of
people
 believe that. Only 7% of the state that both the
news
 and public are responsible, and 3%
is
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don’t know.
Finally
, 60% of respondents said that TV
news
 gave
celebrity
 updates
while
 15% of them pointed out
the
Correct word choice
that the
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 Internet and websites make the
coverage
.
According to
 12% of survey takers, newspapers spread the
celebrity
news
 and 5% of them indicated radio to the media to do
this
.
Then
, there are other and don’t know
sequence
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 are 3% and 5%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words celebrity, news, coverage, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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