The graph shows the consumption of Fast Food among Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000.
The graph illustrates the amount of 3 different types of fast food namely,
pizza
, hamburgers
, and chips
and fish
, used by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Overall
, the consumption of fish
and chips
experienced a wide fluctuation before marking a significant decline. Meanwhile, pizza
and hamburgers
increased dramatically from 1975 to 1995.
For the first 10 year
, the amount of the eaten Change to a plural noun
years
fish
and chips
started with
100 Change preposition
at
items
, then
went down and up to fluctuate between 100 items
and approximately 82 items
till 1985. For pizza
and hamburgers
, they began with low
number of Add an article
a low
the low
items
of barely 8, and 9 respectively in 1975 followed by a sharp rise till hitting a tipping point in 1985 and 1995.
However
, the consumption of fish
and chips
experienced a minimal fall from 95 items
to 39 items
in the last
15 years. Unlike pizza
consumption stopped
to increase to face stability, from 1995 to 2000, of scarlessly 82 Change preposition
of stopped
items
. On the other hand
, teenagers used more hamburgers
Fix the agreement mistake
hamburger
items
ranged
between 85 to Wrong verb form
ranging
hit
a very high amount of 100 Verb problem
apply
items
in 2000.Submitted by Mido on
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