The graph shows the consumption of Fast Food among Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000.
The graph illustrates the amount of 3 different types of fast food namely,
pizza
, Use synonyms
hamburgers
, and Use synonyms
chips
and Use synonyms
fish
, used by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Use synonyms
Overall
, the consumption of Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
experienced a wide fluctuation before marking a significant decline. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
increased dramatically from 1975 to 1995.
For the first 10 Use synonyms
year
, the amount of the eaten Change to a plural noun
years
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
started Use synonyms
with
100 Change preposition
at
items
, Use synonyms
then
went down and up to fluctuate between 100 Linking Words
items
and approximately 82 Use synonyms
items
till 1985. For Use synonyms
pizza
and Use synonyms
hamburgers
, they began with Use synonyms
low
number of Add an article
a low
the low
items
of barely 8, and 9 respectively in 1975 followed by a sharp rise till hitting a tipping point in 1985 and 1995.
Use synonyms
However
, the consumption of Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
experienced a minimal fall from 95 Use synonyms
items
to 39 Use synonyms
items
in the Use synonyms
last
15 years. Unlike Linking Words
pizza
consumption Use synonyms
stopped
to increase to face stability, from 1995 to 2000, of scarlessly 82 Change preposition
of stopped
items
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, teenagers used more Linking Words
Use synonyms
hamburgers
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hamburger
items
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ranged
between 85 to Wrong verb form
ranging
hit
a very high amount of 100 Verb problem
apply
items
in 2000.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hamburgers, chips, fish, items with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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