The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied pie charts illustrate how much money was spent and obtained in a
children
's
charity
per year in the United States of America. It can be clearly seen that the highest amount of
income
source was for donated food.
However
,the highest measure of expenditure was for program services. A very large proportion of money (95.8%) was spent
for
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program services in the
children
's
charity
.Whilst,the highest amount of
income
was for donated food at 86.6% in the US.
Moreover
,a tiny fraction of revenue sources (10.4%) was from community contributions in the
children
's
charity
association,just ahead of investment
income
and government grants at 0.2% in America. A small minority of wage sources for
children
's
charity
was for program revenue at 2.2%,As
apposed
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to
expenditure
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the expenditure
an expenditure
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of fundraising at 2.6% in the US.
Following
this
,the percentage of money
spending
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spent
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for
managment
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management
and general was 1.6% in the
children
's
charity
,just ahead of other
income
of
children
's compassion at 0.4% in the United States.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, charity, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie chart
  • children's charity
  • expenditure
  • income
  • donations
  • individuals
  • corporations
  • government grants
  • administrative costs
  • fundraising activities
  • direct aid
  • disparities
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • balance
  • implications
  • operations
  • future focus
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