the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
The two maps illustrate the
developements
made to a local Correct your spelling
developments
library
from 20 years and what it represents today.
Overall
, the library
developed from only an educational space to a more entertaining area with an events area, a cafe, and self services
machines.
Add a hyphen
self-services
tweenty
years ago, the Correct your spelling
twenty
library
had tables and chairs in the middle just infront
of the entrance.Today these have been removed, and it is now an open space. The CDs, videos, Correct your spelling
in front
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and an
an
computer Change the article
a
room
on the top left was
renovated and expanded into a Correct subject-verb agreement
were
story telling
events area, with sofas and children's fiction books. To the left of the Correct your spelling
storytelling
room
the Add a comma
room,
childrens
Change to a genitive case
children's
room
was replaced with a lecture room
.
However
, the middle section towards the east of the library
is
where the Unnecessary verb
apply
adults
non-fiction books Change to a genitive case
adult's
adults'
was
, is now replaced with fiction books and the addition of Change the verb form
were
self service
machines Add a hyphen
self-service
have
been installed. there has Correct subject-verb agreement
has
also
been a relocation of the information desk to the same areas,
and was redesigned into a cafe towards the right side of the entrance.Remove the comma
apply
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