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the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now
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The two maps illustrate the
developements
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developments
 made to a local
library
 from 20 years and what it represents today.
Overall
, the
library
 developed from only an educational space to a more entertaining area with an events area, a cafe, and
self services
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 machines.
tweenty
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twenty
 years ago, the
library
 had tables and chairs in the middle just
infront
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in front
 of the entrance.Today these have been removed, and it is now an open space. The CDs, videos,
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and an
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an
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 computer
room
 on the top left
was
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were
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 renovated and expanded into a
story telling
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storytelling
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 events area, with sofas and children's fiction books. To the left of the
room
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room,
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 the
childrens
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room
 was replaced with a lecture
room
.
However
, the middle section towards the east of the
library
is
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where the
adults
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 non-fiction books
was
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, is now replaced with fiction books and the addition of
self service
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 machines
have
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has
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 been installed. there has
also
 been a relocation of the information desk to the same areas
,
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 and was redesigned into a cafe towards the right side of the entrance.
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