The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph shows the data about the rate of the well-known in four Asian countries living in cities, where
Philippines
, Use synonyms
Malaysia
, Thailand and Use synonyms
Indonesia
, between 1970 and 2040, when is the fact and the prediction.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
trend
of Use synonyms
four
provided cities is increasing from 1970 to 2040. Correct article usage
the four
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the beginning, the main popular city was the Change the preposition
In
Philippines
, Use synonyms
while
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Malaysia
became the first priority after 1990. Use synonyms
Indonesia
was the Use synonyms
last
priority in 1970 Linking Words
while
the interviewees preferred Linking Words
Indonesia
rather than Thailand after 2000.
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According to
the diagram, the percentage of the population living in Linking Words
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Philippines
and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
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were
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was
closely
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close
about
30 in 1970, where the number Change preposition
to about
of
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in
Malaysia
has Use synonyms
stable
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a stable
raising
in the period of 1970 to 2040. Correct your spelling
rising
However
, the rate of Linking Words
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Philippines
remained unchanged in the following decade and Correct article usage
the Philippines
climb
suddenly from 1980 to 1990. Wrong verb form
climbed
Finally
, the Linking Words
trend
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Philippines
was unstable from Correct article usage
the Philippines
the
decreasing Correct article usage
a
trend
to Use synonyms
the
increasing Correct article usage
an
trend
, which Use synonyms
trued
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continued
at
2010.
The Change preposition
in
trend
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of
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in
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Indonesia
similar to the Add a verb
Indonesia is
Indonesia was
trend
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of
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in
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Philippines
. Correct article usage
the Philippines
Although
the rate of the population living in Thailand Linking Words
also
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had jumping
during the period of time, it rose slightly from 1990 to 2020. Wrong verb form
jumped
Also
, it will go up steamily in the predictive period.Linking Words
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, malaysia, indonesia, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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