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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line graph shows the data about the rate of the well-known in four Asian countries living in cities, where
Philippines
,
Malaysia
, Thailand and
Indonesia
, between 1970 and 2040, when is the fact and the prediction.
Overall
, the
trend
 of
four
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the four
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 provided cities is increasing from 1970 to 2040.
At
Change the preposition
In
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 the beginning, the main popular city was the
Philippines
,
while
Malaysia
 became the first priority after 1990.
Indonesia
 was the
last
 priority in 1970
while
 the interviewees preferred
Indonesia
 rather than Thailand after 2000.
According to
 the diagram, the percentage of the population living in
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
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 and
Malaysia
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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closely
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close
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about
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to about
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 30 in 1970, where the number
of
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in
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Malaysia
 has
stable
Correct article usage
a stable
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raising
Correct your spelling
rising
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 in the period of 1970 to 2040.
However
, the rate of
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
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 remained unchanged in the following decade and
climb
Wrong verb form
climbed
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 suddenly from 1980 to 1990.
Finally
, the
trend
 of
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
show examples
 was unstable from
the
Correct article usage
a
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 decreasing
trend
 to
the
Correct article usage
an
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 increasing
trend
, which
trued
Verb problem
continued
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at
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in
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 2010. The
trend
of
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in
show examples
Indonesia
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Indonesia is
Indonesia was
show examples
 similar to the
trend
of
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in
show examples
Philippines
Correct article usage
the Philippines
show examples
.
Although
 the rate of the population living in Thailand
also
had jumping
Wrong verb form
jumped
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 during the period of time, it rose slightly from 1990 to 2020.
Also
, it will go up steamily in the predictive period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words philippines, malaysia, indonesia, trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • cities
  • Asian countries
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • estimations
  • urban
  • increasing
  • steadily
  • Japan
  • China
  • rise
  • urbanization
  • South Korea
  • India
  • upward trend
  • slow pace
  • surpass
  • resided
  • projected
  • moderate increase
  • significant surge
  • exceed
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