The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.

The graphs below depict information about the Expenditure on Health and Education in the UAE (% of GDP) between 1985 and 1993, and also Infant Mortality and Life Expectancy from 1970 to 1992.
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The provided table presents data on the distribution of the UAE budget to
Health
and Education in percentages from 1985 to 1993,
along with
information on the newborn fatality per 1000 births and the life expectancy in
years
between 1970 and 1992. A review of the data reveals that the education sector received a greater proportion of subsidies than the
health
sector over the course of the calendar period. Despite a notable decline in infant mortality rates, life expectancy exhibited a consistent and gradual increase. In 1985, the amount of money spent on
health
and education was approximately equal, accounting for 7.8% and 10% respectively.
However
, over the subsequent five-year period,
while
the former experienced an insignificant decline, the latter almost doubled in size, reaching figures of 7 and 14 per cent of GDP, respectively.
Furthermore
, in 1993, one in ten expenses were spent on
health
and less than a fifth on pedagogy.
Conversely
, in 1970, the life expectancy of an individual in the UAE was 61
years
,
while
the mortality rate among newborns was 70 per thousand.
However
, the former increased to 70
years
and the latter decreased to 20 people in 22
years
.
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