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The bar chart shows the level of air pollution in five different countries. Summurize the informationn by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the level of air pollution in five different countries. Summurize the informationn by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the volume of gas emissions in five
countries
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, namely the UK, New Zealand, Austria, Australia and the
USA
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, measured in millions of tonnes.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
air
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 pollution level in the
USA
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 is the highest level among the five
countries
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,
while
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 New Zealand has the best
air
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 quality compared to the remaining
countries
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 presented in the figure.
According to
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 the data, people in the
USA
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 suffer from poor
air
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 condition, since there are 80 million tonnes of
air
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 pollution in their country. The European
countries
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, the UK and Austria
for instance
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, are the second and third
countries
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, each by around half of the amount of greenhouse gas emissions in the
USA
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.
On the other hand
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, regions in the Australian continent,
such
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 as Australia and New Zealand, have the cleanest atmosphere for their people to breathe. Both have the lowest level of
air
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 pollution, about 35 and 30 million tonnes, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, usa, air with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Air pollution level
  • Country-specific data
  • Highest/lowest levels
  • Overall trend
  • Significant differences
  • Industrialization
  • Population density
  • Environmental regulations
  • Emissions
  • Comparative analysis
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