The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The line graph compares the changes
of
eaten fast food by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 2000.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, all figures experienced different trends. While
the consumption of pizza and hamburgers were
increasing quickly, the line of eating fish and chips decreased rapidly.
In 1975, the starting point of fish and chips was a hundred times. But it fell dramatically to around eighty occurrences. In 1995, it was pointed to about ninety incidents. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Then
till two thousand
it declined slowly to forty instances. The starting point of eating hamburgers was about ten times in 1975. Add a comma
thousand,
Then
, until 1985 it increased rapidly to around 90 incidents. In two thousand, it got
Verb problem
reached
the
highest point with Change the word
its
hundred
events.
From 1975 until 1995 the number of eating pizza increased quickly to around Correct article usage
a hundred
eighty five
times from about five events. It got no change till two thousand.Add a hyphen
eighty-five
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