The graph shows the rates of obesity in men and women in the country of Padonia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph above compares the

obesity

rates

of

men

and

women

in

Padonia

measured in

percentage

within the period of 2016 to 2020.

Overall

, the data reveals a growth of

rates

for both

men

and

women

with

women

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the higher

percentage

as opposed to

men

at the end

of the given period. The

rates

of

obesity

in

Padonia

began at around 10% for both males and females. Following the first year, the number

then

rose gradually and reached

to

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above 10% for males and females with females

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the

percentage

a little bit higher to be around 15%.

However

, in 2019,

men

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the men

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of

Padonia

, took the lead of the

percentage

over the

women

to

reached

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just below 20% and closed with above 20% in the

last

given years. For

women

, the

rates

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rate

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of

obesity

was slightly below the

men

on

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in

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2019 but

then

hit its peak to almost 25% in 2020, leading

the

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most higher

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highest

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rates

of

obesity

in

Padonia

.