The graph shows the rates of obesity in men and women in the country of Padonia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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obesity

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rates

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of

men

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and

women

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in

Padonia

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measured in

percentage

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within the period of 2016 to 2020.

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, the data reveals a growth of

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for both

men

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and

women

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with

women

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the higher

percentage

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as opposed to

men

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of the given period. The

rates

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of

obesity

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in

Padonia

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began at around 10% for both males and females. Following the first year, the number

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rose gradually and reached

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above 10% for males and females with females

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the

percentage

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a little bit higher to be around 15%.

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, in 2019,

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men

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the men

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of

Padonia

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, took the lead of the

percentage

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over the

women

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to

reached

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just below 20% and closed with above 20% in the

last

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given years. For

women

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, the

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rates

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rate

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of

obesity

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was slightly below the

men

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on

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2019 but

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hit its peak to almost 25% in 2020, leading

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most higher

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rates

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of

obesity

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in

Padonia

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.