The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The bar graph gives information about
China
's
ownership
of
vehicles
from 1987 to 1999.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
number
of
vehicles
in
China
grew significantly in a span of 12
years
. In 1987, the Chinese population owned
vehicles
to around 300 per 10 thousand
of
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people
this
figure continued to grow to a high of almost 800 in 1991. Interestingly, the
number
of
people
buying cars did not increase in
years
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the years
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1992-1994, but
China
has seen
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an exponential growth
of
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in
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its vehicle
ownership
in 1995 hitting a high of approximately 2,000
every
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for every
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10 thousand
people
. Over the next 3
years
, the Chinese
people
owned a staggering
number
of 3,000 doubling the
number
in the previous
years
. In 1999, the
number
of
vehicles
owned in
China
rose exponentially making it the year with the highest quantity of cars owned standing at about 4,100 per ten thousand
people
.
To conclude
,
China
had the lowest
number
of car
ownership
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in
years
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the years
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1987 to 1994, but in mid
1990s
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mid-1990s
its vehicle
ownership
continued to rise
in
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threefold.
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