Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
Many individuals
says
that in recent times Change the verb form
say
education
levels have decreased, mainly in two areas, literacy
and numeracy
. Excessive use of social media
and online education
system
are two main causes behind Fix the agreement mistake
systems
fall
Correct article usage
the fall
of
Change preposition
in
educations level
, Fix the agreement mistake
education levels
although
, switching to physical classes
and strict regulation by government
Add an article
the government
required
to tackle these issues.
Starting with Add a missing verb
are required
causes
behind declination of Correct article usage
the causes
education
level, nowadays, youngsters
are currently focusing more into
imagination, like, they are spending more energy Change preposition
on
into
making Change preposition
on
instagram
reels and online Change the capitalization
Instagram
youtube
videos to earn money rather Correct your spelling
YouTube
then
focusing more on improving Replace the word
than
numeracy
and literacy
skills. This
is because these youngsters
are inspired by other people
's wealth, people
who have earned money from social media
apps
. For example
, after Covid-19
, Correct your spelling
COVID-19
youngsters
are more focusing
Replace the word
focused
into
Change preposition
on
a
social Correct article usage
apply
media
apps
to earn money rather focusing
on learning new skills. Another Change preposition
than focusing
cause
is, children
are having trouble Correct word choice
that children
in
focusing Change preposition
apply
in
their online teaching. Change preposition
on
This
is because most schools now focusing more on online education
teaching, this
system
can cause
them into a lower concentration level and use of other media
apps
while
attending online lectures. This
ultimately leads to decline
in Add an article
a decline
education
levels.
To tackle this
issues
, Fix the agreement mistake
issue
government
must Add an article
the government
have to
enter into Verb problem
apply
this
situation and needs to
introduce new strict regulations for social Verb problem
apply
media
apps
to prevent using social media
apps
to
certain age Change preposition
by
group
of Fix the agreement mistake
groups
people
. This
will helps
certain age group Change the verb form
help
people
to focus more on improving numeracy
and literacy
skills. Secondly
, starting physical classes
at school rather then
promoting online lectures, many Replace the word
than
survey
has proved that online Change to a plural noun
surveys
classes
are main
Add an article
the main
cause
of the declination
of Replace the word
decline
education
. For example
, in Gujarat, after "Covid-19" many schools adopted online
Correct article usage
an online
education
system
, but after facing numerous low scoring
results, Add a hyphen
low-scoring
government
has recently decided to initiate physical Add an article
the government
classes
at schools.
To conclude
, excessive use of social media
amongst youngsters
and online
Correct article usage
the online
education
system
are
Change the verb form
is
main
Add an article
the main
cause
behind Fix the agreement mistake
causes
decline
in Correct article usage
the decline
numeracy
and literacy
, although
, by
introducing physical Change preposition
apply
classes
and government
interpretation can help to tackle these issues.Submitted by prajapativishal9328 on
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