Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
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says
that in recent times Change the verb form
say
education
levels have decreased, mainly in two areas, Use synonyms
literacy
and Use synonyms
numeracy
. Excessive use of social Use synonyms
media
and online Use synonyms
education
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Use synonyms
system
are two main causes behind Fix the agreement mistake
systems
fall
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the fall
of
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in
educations level
, Fix the agreement mistake
education levels
although
, switching to physical Linking Words
classes
and strict regulation by Use synonyms
Use synonyms
government
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the government
required
to tackle these issues.
Starting with Add a missing verb
are required
causes
behind declination of Correct article usage
the causes
education
level, nowadays, Use synonyms
youngsters
are currently focusing more Use synonyms
into
imagination, like, they are spending more energy Change preposition
on
into
making Change preposition
on
instagram
reels and online Change the capitalization
Instagram
youtube
videos to earn money rather Correct your spelling
YouTube
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then
focusing more on improving Replace the word
than
numeracy
and Use synonyms
literacy
skills. Use synonyms
This
is because these Linking Words
youngsters
are inspired by other Use synonyms
people
's wealth, Use synonyms
people
who have earned money from social Use synonyms
media
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apps
. Use synonyms
For example
, after Linking Words
Covid-19
, Correct your spelling
COVID-19
youngsters
are more Use synonyms
focusing
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focused
into
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on
a
social Correct article usage
apply
media
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apps
to earn money rather Use synonyms
focusing
on learning new skills. Another Change preposition
than focusing
cause
is, Use synonyms
children
are having trouble Correct word choice
that children
in
focusing Change preposition
apply
in
their online teaching. Change preposition
on
This
is because most schools now focusing more on online Linking Words
education
teaching, Use synonyms
this
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system
can Use synonyms
cause
them into a lower concentration level and use of other Use synonyms
media
Use synonyms
apps
Use synonyms
while
attending online lectures. Linking Words
This
ultimately leads to Linking Words
decline
in Add an article
a decline
education
levels.
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this
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issues
, Fix the agreement mistake
issue
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government
must Add an article
the government
have to
enter into Verb problem
apply
this
situation and Linking Words
needs to
introduce new strict regulations for social Verb problem
apply
media
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apps
to prevent using social Use synonyms
media
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apps
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to
certain age Change preposition
by
group
of Fix the agreement mistake
groups
people
. Use synonyms
This
will Linking Words
helps
certain age group Change the verb form
help
people
to focus more on improving Use synonyms
numeracy
and Use synonyms
literacy
skills. Use synonyms
Secondly
, starting physical Linking Words
classes
at school rather Use synonyms
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then
promoting online lectures, many Replace the word
than
survey
has proved that online Change to a plural noun
surveys
classes
are Use synonyms
main
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the main
cause
of the Use synonyms
declination
of Replace the word
decline
education
. Use synonyms
For example
, in Gujarat, after "Covid-19" many schools adopted Linking Words
online
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an online
education
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system
, but after facing numerous Use synonyms
low scoring
results, Add a hyphen
low-scoring
Use synonyms
government
has recently decided to initiate physical Add an article
the government
classes
at schools.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, excessive use of social Linking Words
media
amongst Use synonyms
youngsters
and Use synonyms
online
Correct article usage
the online
education
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system
Use synonyms
are
Change the verb form
is
main
Add an article
the main
Use synonyms
cause
behind Fix the agreement mistake
causes
decline
in Correct article usage
the decline
numeracy
and Use synonyms
literacy
, Use synonyms
although
, Linking Words
by
introducing physical Change preposition
apply
classes
and Use synonyms
government
interpretation can help to tackle these issues.Use synonyms
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