Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

The debate over the place

professionals

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should pursue their occupational paths after being trained has sparked considerable debate.

While

some argue that it is constructive for the society if they stayed in the

country

they were retrained, I,

along with

others contend that considering doing so in other nations may be more conducive for their holistic development as

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essay will elaborate.

To begin

with, migrating to a

country

in which a profession is being more frequently and effectively

practiced

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, provides better job

propects

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prospects

.

With

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relying on the expertise presented there, individuals can find more job vacancies and

with

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higher salaries.

Moreover

, having to forge communications with people from distinct cultures, broadens their professional networks, on which they can rely to seek

assisstance

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assistance

.

Such

possibilities

enriches

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their professional experiences

further

, subsequent to their sophistication.

This

expertise brings them recognition, public custom and

thus

, more revenue;

therefore

, they'd enjoy a boosted quality of life. Iranian doctors,

for instance

, who spent years working in the USA hospitals, are of

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fame among others in Iran and have substantial patients

annualy

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annually

, highlighting the positive impacts of working in a

country

well-developed in the medicine field.

On the contrary

, some may claim that people should remain in the

country

where they took up

trainings

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to compensate for the government funding allocated for their

prepareness

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preparedness

by gaining lucrative incomes.

Furthermore

, they assume that the trainees are required to consider their own society

instead

of another, making great contributions to it, thereby improving the socioeconomic condition of the region. Take Iran as an example; where since the authorities have heightened

country

exiting fees to hinder sophisticated engineers from moving abroad, the number of skyscrapers constructed surged dramatically.

Although

there is some accuracy to

this

notion, it overlooks the fact that making

this

phenomenon obligatory, only breeds resentment and

disengaement

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disengagement

. In conclusion,

although

some advocate for

trainess

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trainees

trainers

staying in their countries, I firmly believe that moving to a more developed one imparts more merits. In fact, they'd have a

brodened

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broadened

professional network, enriched experiences and

an

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improved financial stability.