The plan below shows a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reproting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the plan when Grande Park was established in 1920 and what it looks like in the present day.

Overall

, we can notice that

stage

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the stage

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for

musician

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musicians

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has been replaced with a huge amphitheatre for concerts and rearrangement of the

rose

garden

and

seatings

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seating

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.

However

, there are minor changes

such

as

addition

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the addition

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of a water feature,

children’s

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a children’s

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play area, a cafe and an extra

entrance

. When audiences enter from the Eldon

entrance

, one can notice that the

rose

garden

and

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seating

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on the right side of the

entrance

have been relocated to the middle of the park where a fountain once was.

Moreover

, on the left side of the

entrance

, the glasshouse and seating

has

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been replaced with a water feature which can be

also

accessed through an additional underground

entrance

now.

Besides

that, one can see the

rose

garden

remained on the left upon entering through Arnold Avenue but the

rose

garden

on the right has been replaced with

cafe

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a cafe

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. Not only that, once now can leave their kids to play at the children;

s

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play area at the far left corner of the park where the pond for water

plant

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plants

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once was.