The diagram below shows how instant noodels are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how instant noodels are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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There is given a diagram process which depicts producing fast
noodles
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in a factory.
Overall
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, there are eight levels in manufacturing instant
noodles
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which is starting from storing flour in silos to mixing with other materials and processing and
labaling
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labelling
at the end
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of the line process. First of all, storage silos pour flour into
container
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a container
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of
truck
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the truck
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and carry it to the mixer.
Secondly
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, flour
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is mixes
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mixes
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mixed
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with water and oil and the mixture of material is rolled by a roller to make a dough sheet.
Then
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, it becomes striped by a machine. In the fifth stage, the strips changed into
noodles
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discs and guided to the
opened-heater
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opened heater
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to dry and cook with
an
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oil. Between 6 and 7 stages, the
noodles
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poured into the cups and added vegetables and spices to
make
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taste them.
At
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the
last
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section, they are labelled and sealed with a specific machine and packed.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • flour storage
  • silos
  • processing
  • mixing ingredients
  • sheeting
  • shaping
  • steaming
  • drying
  • packaging
  • sealing
  • labeling
  • shipping
  • distribution
  • moisture removal
  • individual packets
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