The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates the categories of media that people in
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distinct age groups used to get the daily news in one country in 2011.
Overall
, the proportion of people using the
radio
from different
ages
is higher than the others,
whereas
the only group is the second-ranking.
Moreover
, social networks indicate a decreasing trend, plus
radio
and
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go up and down several times.
Firstly
, the
radio
is common for all
ages
using it. When the
ages
10-17 it only accounts for 40%, but in the next
ages
about 18-29, 30-49, 50-64, which aged surgery significantly in using it, and all of
that is
nearly equal to 93%.
However
, the
aged
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from 65+ dipped notably from 93% to 87%.
On the other hand
, the
radio
is the most popular preference, the
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and Social networks least common. The
age
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10-17 and 18-29 in Social networks that have equal to 80% but 30-49, 50-64,
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decreased sustainably when 80% to 45% and continue to reduce to 10%.
However
,
Micro blogging
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between 10-17 and 18-29 increased gradually
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% to 23% and immediately declined sizably, as
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result losing
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20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words radio, ages with synonyms.

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