The bar chart shows the types of media that people of different age groups used to get daily news in one country in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates the categories of media that people in
the
distinct age groups used to get the daily news in one country in 2011.
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Overall
, the proportion of people using the radio
from different ages
is higher than the others, whereas
the only group is the second-ranking. Moreover
, social networks indicate a decreasing trend, plus radio
and micro blogging
go up and down several times.
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micro-blogging
Firstly
, the radio
is common for all ages
using it. When the ages
10-17 it only accounts for 40%, but in the next ages
about 18-29, 30-49, 50-64, which aged surgery significantly in using it, and all of that is
nearly equal to 93%. However
, the aged
from 65+ dipped notably from 93% to 87%.
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age
On the other hand
, the radio
is the most popular preference, the Micro blogging
and Social networks least common. The Correct your spelling
Microblogging
age
10-17 and 18-29 in Social networks that have equal to 80% but 30-49, 50-64, Fix the agreement mistake
ages
65+
Correct word choice
and 65+
it
decreased sustainably when 80% to 45% and continue to reduce to 10%. Correct pronoun usage
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However
, Micro blogging
between 10-17 and 18-29 increased gradually Correct your spelling
Microblogging
20
% to 23% and immediately declined sizably, as Change preposition
from 20
the
result losing Correct article usage
a
at
20%.Change preposition
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