The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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depicts
status
of the city population in four Asian countries (Philipines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia) in Correct article usage
the status
percents
from 1970 to 2040 (with forecast to two decades - 2030 and 2040). At Fix the agreement mistake
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apply
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the
people living in the cities has Correct article usage
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rising
in all of the countries.
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Indonesia
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is quite the same - like 50%, Correct your spelling
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of 50% in 2020, and prediction of additional growth of 10% ( in total 48%) in the next two decades.
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Philipines
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the Philipines
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the Philipines
Philipines
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Philippines
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in 1990 of Correct your spelling
peak
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50% (increased from 32% in 1970), after that percentage of Correct your spelling
almost
city
population decreased to 40% in 2010, and started to rise gradually with the prediction of 50% in 2040. In Thailand Correct article usage
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