The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These two maps

depic

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depict

the changes that have

occured

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occurred

in university sports facilities from 1990 to nowadays. At

the

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first sight, there were many changes both outdoor and indoor, it seems that

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the previous

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entire

sport

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sports

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court was outdoor, and now they built

the

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special construction, which encompasses the most of facilities,

such

as the Indoor

Pool

and the Fitness

Centre

. We can divide all of the equipment into two groups - indoor

wich

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which

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contains

Indoor

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an Indoor

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Pool

, Changing Room, Fitness

Centre

, Cafe, and Reception and outdoor with Basketball and Tennis Courts . I'll start my description from the outdoor facilities. There was

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big park with

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trees in 1990 in the

left up

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corner of the scheme, that had been changed by the Basketball Court today. In the left down corner there was a Car Park, that we can't see on the modern map. It had been changed by 4 Tennis Courts in our time. We may predict that

this

kind of sport become more popular, because of

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the quantity of

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Courts from 2 in 1990 to 4 now. Now I'll describe the

contant

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content

contents

of the

Sport

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Centre

building.

Firstly

, the Reception and the Cafe stayed unchanged.

Secondly

, the Outdoor

Pool

had

benn

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been

changed by

Indoor

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an Indoor

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Pool

, so

its

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became

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usefull

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useful

all over the year, regardless

weather

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of weather

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Moreover

, the Changing room has been expanded twice. And

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last

but not least - the Fitness

Centre

absolutely

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new

facitily

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facility

, that was not in 1990.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pool, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.

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2Word repetition
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Topic Vocabulary:

Layout alterations
Refurbished
Demolished
Erected
Renovated
Sports facilities
Tennis courts
Basketball courts
Football fields
Athletics track
Encroachment
Accessibility
Landscaping
Infrastructure
Spatial arrangement
Ample space
Congested
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Amenity
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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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