The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These two maps

depic

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depict

the changes that have

occured

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occurred

in university sports facilities from 1990 to nowadays. At

the

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first sight, there were many changes both outdoor and indoor, it seems that

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the previous

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entire

sport

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sports

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court was outdoor, and now they built

the

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special construction, which encompasses the most of facilities,

such

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as the Indoor

Pool

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and the Fitness

Centre

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. We can divide all of the equipment into two groups - indoor

wich

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contains

Indoor

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an Indoor

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Pool

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, Changing Room, Fitness

Centre

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, Cafe, and Reception and outdoor with Basketball and Tennis Courts . I'll start my description from the outdoor facilities. There was

comparatively

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big park with

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trees in 1990 in the

left up

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corner of the scheme, that had been changed by the Basketball Court today. In the left down corner there was a Car Park, that we can't see on the modern map. It had been changed by 4 Tennis Courts in our time. We may predict that

this

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kind of sport become more popular, because of

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the increase

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the quantity of

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Courts from 2 in 1990 to 4 now. Now I'll describe the

contant

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content

contents

of the

Sport

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Sports

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Centre

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building.

Firstly

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, the Reception and the Cafe stayed unchanged.

Secondly

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, the Outdoor

Pool

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had

benn

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been

changed by

Indoor

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an Indoor

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Pool

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, so

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became

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usefull

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useful

all over the year, regardless

weather

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of weather

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, the Changing room has been expanded twice. And

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last

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but not least - the Fitness

Centre

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absolutely

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new

facitily

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facility

, that was not in 1990.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pool, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

246 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Layout alterations
Refurbished
Demolished
Erected
Renovated
Sports facilities
Tennis courts
Basketball courts
Football fields
Athletics track
Encroachment
Accessibility
Landscaping
Infrastructure
Spatial arrangement
Ample space
Congested
Upgrade
Downgrade
Amenity
Displacement

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on laand and in sea l.What are the reasons and solutions?

the advantages and disadvantages of technology in education

Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that chilren should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.