The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two maps
depic
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depict
the changes that have
occured
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occurred
in university sports facilities from 1990 to nowadays. At
the
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first sight, there were many changes both outdoor and indoor, it seems that
previous
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entire
sport
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sports
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court was outdoor, and now they built
the
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special construction, which encompasses the most of facilities,
such
as the Indoor
Pool
and the Fitness
Centre
. We can divide all of the equipment into two groups - indoor
wich
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which
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contains
Indoor
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an Indoor
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Pool
, Changing Room, Fitness
Centre
, Cafe, and Reception and outdoor with Basketball and Tennis Courts . I'll start my description from the outdoor facilities. There was
comparatively
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big park with
the
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trees in 1990 in the
left up
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corner of the scheme, that had been changed by the Basketball Court today. In the left down corner there was a Car Park, that we can't see on the modern map. It had been changed by 4 Tennis Courts in our time. We may predict that
this
kind of sport become more popular, because of
increase
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of
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the quantity of
the
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Courts from 2 in 1990 to 4 now. Now I'll describe the
contant
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content
contents
of the
Sport
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Sports
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Centre
building.
Firstly
, the Reception and the Cafe stayed unchanged.
Secondly
, the Outdoor
Pool
had
benn
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been
changed by
Indoor
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an Indoor
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Pool
, so
its
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it
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became
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usefull
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useful
all over the year, regardless
weather
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.
Moreover
, the Changing room has been expanded twice. And
the
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last
but not least - the Fitness
Centre
,
absolutely
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new
facitily
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facility
, that was not in 1990.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pool, centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout alterations
  • Refurbished
  • Demolished
  • Erected
  • Renovated
  • Sports facilities
  • Tennis courts
  • Basketball courts
  • Football fields
  • Athletics track
  • Encroachment
  • Accessibility
  • Landscaping
  • Infrastructure
  • Spatial arrangement
  • Ample space
  • Congested
  • Upgrade
  • Downgrade
  • Amenity
  • Displacement
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