the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The map illustrated below shows the major differences en route to the city hospital in 2007 and in 2012.
The city hospital was located between the ring
road
and the city Use synonyms
road
in 2007. Use synonyms
whereas
, in 2010 the medical centre was surrounded by a roundabout on the southern Linking Words
side
and a ring Use synonyms
road
on the northern Use synonyms
side
.
In 2007, the Use synonyms
road
leading to the hospital was on the left Use synonyms
side
of the main Use synonyms
road
. the car parking for the public and staff was situated to the south-east of the hospital Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the bus stop was on either Linking Words
side
of the highway going toward the medical institute.
Use synonyms
Whereas
, in 2010, there were significant changes made to the locale, Linking Words
such
as the parking for the public was moved right next to the healthcare centre, yet the staff parking remained in the same position. The roadway leading to the health centre was in between two around-turns, Linking Words
while
the bus stand was entirely relocated to the left-hand Linking Words
side
of the hospital Use synonyms
road
.Use synonyms
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