The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart illustrates

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in the rate of population between

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the

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Philippines

,Malaysia,

Thailand

and Indonesia between 1970

to

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and

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2040.The data are mesured in persentsages.

overall

,all given countries experience an upward trend.

Although

Indonesia

initially

was the lowest, it outraced

Thailand

and the Philipines

at the end

of the period. on the one hand, the initial number for Malaysia and

Philippines

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the same at around 30%.

However

, Malaysia showed a dramatic increase between 1970 to 2020.

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, they expect that

this

percentage will continue to rise and reach a peak in 2030 at around 80%. With regard to the

Philippines

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Philippines,

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it stayed about the same

at

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in

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the first decade at 30% and

then

it rose to become the third on the list at around 50% in 2030.

on the other hand

,

Thailand

and Indonesia were less than 20% in 1970.

whereas

,

Thailand

increased

charply

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sharply

and exceeded the

Philippines

and

Thailand

at 30% and 40% respectively

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. It is expected that the rate of population

of

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Thailand

will increase to roughly 60% in 2030.