The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

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The maps highlight the main changes that took place in West Park Secondary

School

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from 1950 to 2010.

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, the

area

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witnessed various transformations, the most important of which was the removal of agricultural areas and residential areas to make way for the change of sizes and positions in the facilities between 1950 and 2010. The maps indicate the

school

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remaining untouched in the right

center

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of the

area

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. Behind the position of the

school

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, the playground remained intact from 1950 to 1980,

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this

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facility became smaller in size in 2010.

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, what was once farmland in 1950, was replaced by

sport

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fields in 1980. Apart from that,

this

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area

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decreased in size significantly in 2010. Concerning the positions next to the

school

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, the residential

area

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in 1950 was turned into new different facilities, which were a small science block and car park. Regarding to science block,

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area

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was next to the

school

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and unchanged from 1980 to 2010.

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, the car park next to the science block witnessed a large expansion between 1980 and 2010.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

178 words

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