The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The maps highlight the main changes that took place in West Park Secondary
School
from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, the
area
witnessed various transformations, the most important of which was the removal of agricultural areas and residential areas to make way for the change of sizes and positions in the facilities between 1950 and 2010. The maps indicate the
school
remaining untouched in the right
center
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of the
area
. Behind the position of the
school
, the playground remained intact from 1950 to 1980,
however
,
this
facility became smaller in size in 2010.
Additionally
, what was once farmland in 1950, was replaced by
sport
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fields in 1980. Apart from that,
this
area
decreased in size significantly in 2010. Concerning the positions next to the
school
, the residential
area
in 1950 was turned into new different facilities, which were a small science block and car park. Regarding to science block,
this
area
was next to the
school
and unchanged from 1980 to 2010.
In contrast
, the car park next to the science block witnessed a large expansion between 1980 and 2010.
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