The graph below shows the three different kinds of emission sources (oil / coal / gas) of greenhouse gas in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the comparison of three fossil fuels that affected
carbon
emissions in the UK from 1990 to 2010.
It can be seen that coal dominantly contributed the greenhouse gas
in 1990 and 1995, while
gas
had the biggest amount of production from 2000 to 2010.
In 1990, coal produced 310 million
tons
of carbon
source, and 280 million
tons
of gas
in 1995. In contrast
, gas
had the least amount of contribution, accounting for 220 million
tons
in 1990 and marked up by 50 million
tons
in 1995.
Furthermore
, the highest contributor of carbon
footprint in 2000, 2015 and 2010 was gas
fuel, with 300 million
tons
in 2000, and added up by 10 million
tons
in the next two periods. Conversely
, coal was marked as the lowest source of the
Correct article usage
apply
carbon
footprint from 2000 to 2010, with 220 million
tons
and 180 million
tons
of production respectively.Submitted by faisa8687 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, gas, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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