The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The line chart illustrates information about the total of attendees for 5 various activities at a specific social centre in Melbourne, Australia over a 20-year
period
between 2000 and 2020
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Overall
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it is clear that
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number
of Use synonyms
participants
in the Use synonyms
Film
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Club
had the most Use synonyms
members
during the Use synonyms
period
from 2000 to 2020.
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According to
the data, in the first year, the Linking Words
film
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club
had 65 Use synonyms
members
which was the most figures, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
participants
in marital art was 35. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
participants
in the Use synonyms
Film
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club
declined slightly by 5 Use synonyms
members
in the next 10 years, Use synonyms
however
, there was an insignificant growth in marital art from 35 to 39 attendees. There was an increase back to the original Linking Words
number
in both activities including marital art and Use synonyms
film
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club
(35 Use synonyms
participants
and 65 Use synonyms
participants
).
Looking at the line graph, there were 15 Use synonyms
participants
in tennis in 2000, after which the numbers surged to 55 in 2020. In the first 5 years, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
participants
in musical performances was zero Use synonyms
however
it had a dramatic increase to 15 Linking Words
members
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at the end
of the Linking Words
period
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In contrast
, the total of attendees in Amateur had a slight rise in the first 5 years, Linking Words
nonetheless
, it dropped by 20 Linking Words
members
during the Use synonyms
period
from 2000 to 2020 at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia.Use synonyms
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