The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The line chart illustrates information about the total of attendees for 5 various activities at a specific social centre in Melbourne, Australia over a 20-year
period
between 2000 and 2020
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of participants
in the Film
Club
had the most members
during the period
from 2000 to 2020.
According to
the data, in the first year, the film
club
had 65 members
which was the most figures, while
the number
of participants
in marital art was 35. The number
of participants
in the Film
club
declined slightly by 5 members
in the next 10 years, however
, there was an insignificant growth in marital art from 35 to 39 attendees. There was an increase back to the original number
in both activities including marital art and film
club
(35 participants
and 65 participants
).
Looking at the line graph, there were 15 participants
in tennis in 2000, after which the numbers surged to 55 in 2020. In the first 5 years, the number
of participants
in musical performances was zero however
it had a dramatic increase to 15 members
at the end
of the period
. In contrast
, the total of attendees in Amateur had a slight rise in the first 5 years, nonetheless
, it dropped by 20 members
during the period
from 2000 to 2020 at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia.Submitted by nguyenhoanganhquan918 on
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