The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city ofNewtown between 1980 and 1996.
The line chart presents the
complaint
numbers reported to Environmental
Health authorities of Newton about Correct article usage
the Environmental
noise
from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
, The highest number
of noise
complaints
comes from Domestic or household, while
the noise
from Road construction was complained
Change to the active voice
complained
has complained
the
least. It is clearly noticeable that the Change preposition
about the
complaint
number
reported about factories has remained stable. Interestingly, the trend of the complaint
numbers about traffic is similar to the trend from the household graph, but in the lower levels.
In 1980, 500 complaints
about noise
from households were reported. This
remained unchanged until 1984 before the drop to 400 where it remained stable until 1988. However
, the complaint
number
of this
noise
surged to the peak of 1200 in 1996, which was seen as the highest complaint
number
of all complaints
about noise
in Newtown.
However
, the number
of complaints
about traffic in 1980 started at 300 and remained stable until 1984 before dropping and bouncing to 600 in 1996.
The factories complaints
is
about 400 and slightly increase to approximately 500 in 1986 and stable at Change the verb form
are
this
rate until 1996.
Significantly, the traffic complaints
continuously decreased from more than around 600 (in 1980) to around 100 (in 1996)Submitted by dondollaraus on
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