The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city ofNewtown between 1980 and 1996.

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city ofNewtown between 1980 and 1996.
The line chart presents the
complaint
numbers reported to
Environmental
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the Environmental
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Health authorities of Newton about
noise
from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
, The highest
number
of
noise
complaints
comes from Domestic or household,
while
the
noise
from Road construction
was complained
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complained
has complained
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the
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about the
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least. It is clearly noticeable that the
complaint
number
reported about factories has remained stable. Interestingly, the trend of the
complaint
numbers about traffic is similar to the trend from the household graph, but in the lower levels. In 1980, 500
complaints
about
noise
from households were reported.
This
remained unchanged until 1984 before the drop to 400 where it remained stable until 1988.
However
, the
complaint
number
of
this
noise
surged to the peak of 1200 in 1996, which was seen as the highest
complaint
number
of all
complaints
about
noise
in Newtown.
However
, the
number
of
complaints
about traffic in 1980 started at 300 and remained stable until 1984 before dropping and bouncing to 600 in 1996. The factories
complaints
is
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about 400 and slightly increase to approximately 500 in 1986 and stable at
this
rate until 1996. Significantly, the traffic
complaints
continuously decreased from more than around 600 (in 1980) to around 100 (in 1996)
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words complaint, noise, number, complaints with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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