The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1966.

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1966.
The
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line
chart presents the complaint
number
about
noise
from the different sources to authorities of Environmental Health of
newtown
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Newtown
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city from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
, the highest
number
of
noise
complaints
comes from domestic or household,
while
the lowest is from road construction. It is clearly seen that the
complaints
made about
noise
from factories
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not change much;
it's
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their
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number
has remained stable. Interestingly, the trend of complaint
number
made about traffic is similar to that of domestic
noise
, but it is lower. In 1980, 500
complaints
about
noise
from
household
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households
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were reposted.
This
remained unchanged until 1984 before the drop to 400 where it
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stable
to
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1988.
However
, the
complaints
number
of
this
noise
surged to the
speak
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peak
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of 1200 in 1996, which was seen as the highest complaint
number
of all
complaints
about
noise
in Newtown. But for
number
of
complaints
from traffic in 1980 started at 300
complaints
and stable at 300
complaints
until 1984 before the
complaints
had
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dropped
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and
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bounced
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up to 600
complaints
in 1996.
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of
complaints
of
noise
from factories is 400 and
be
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increase to 500 in 1986 and be stable until 1996. It is true that
complaints
from road work
are
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have
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decreased continuously from more than 600 in 1980 to 100
complaints
. in 1996.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, noise, complaints with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Complaints
  • Environmental Health authorities
  • Noise pollution
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Trend
  • Spikes
  • Fluctuations
  • Time frame
  • Population growth
  • Industrial development
  • Public awareness
  • Implications
  • Addressing the issue
  • Data analysis
  • Year-on-year changes
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