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The graph below show the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996

The graph below show the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996
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The line chart presents the
complaint
number
 about
noise
 from different sources reported to authorities of Environmental Health of Newtown city from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
, the highest
number
 of
noise
 complaints come from domestic or household
noise
,
while
 the
complaint
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complaints
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 about
the
Correct article usage
apply
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road work
noise
is
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are
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 the least. The
complaint
number
 reported about factories has
remain
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remained
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 stable. Interestingly, the graph of
complaint
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complaints
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 about traffic
noise
is look
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looks
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 like
household
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a household
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 graph but lower. In 1980, 500
complaint
Change to a plural noun
complaints
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 about
noise
 from
household
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households
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 were reported.
This
remain
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remains
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 unchanged until 1984 before the drop to 400 where it
remain
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remains
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 stable
to
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until
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 1988.
However
, the
complaint
number
 of
this
noise
 surged to the peak of 1200 in 1996, which was seen as the highest
complaint
number
 of all complaints about
noise
 in Newtown. The
complaint
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complaints
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 about traffic
noise
 in 1980 start at 300 and stable on that to 1984 before it up to 600 in 1996.
Number
Change the article
A number
The number
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 of
complaint
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complaints
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 about
factories
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factory
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noise
is
Wrong verb form
was
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 400 in 1986 and slowly
growth up
Wrong verb form
grew
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 to 500 in 1986 and
stable
Add a missing verb
was stable
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on
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at
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this
number
 for 10 years.
Clearly
Add a comma
Clearly,
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that
Correct determiner usage
the
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number
 of
complaint
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complaints
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 about road work
noise
 dropped from over 600 in 1986 to 100 in 1996.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words complaint, number, noise with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 9 times.
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