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The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newton between 1980 and 1966.

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newton between 1980 and 1966.
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 chart presents the
complaint
 numbers about
noise
 from different sources reported to authorities of Environmental Health of Newton city from 1980 and 1966. R
Overall
,the highest
number
 of
noise
complaints
 comes from domestic or household,
while
 the lowest is from road construction.It is clearly seen that the
complaint
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complaints
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 made about
noise
 from factories
does
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 not change much;its
number
 has remained stable.Interestingly,the trend of
noise
complaints
 about traffic is similar to household
noise
,but it is lower than that
domestic
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. In 1980, 500
complaints
 about
noise
 from
household
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households
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 were reported.
This
 remained unchanged until 1984 before the drop to 400 where it
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 stable
to
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until
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 1988.
However
,the
complaint
number
 of
this
noise
 surged to the peak of 1200 in 1996, which was seen as the
hightest
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highest
complaint
number
 of all
complaints
 about
noise
 in Newton. But, the
number
 of
noise
complaints
 about traffic in 1980 started at 300 stable
to
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in
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 1984 before
came
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coming
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 to 600 in 1996. The
number
 of
noise
complaints
 about factories at 400 and
increase
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increased
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 to 500 in 1986 it is stable to 1996. It is
clearly
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 that the
number
 of
noise
complaints
 about road works continuously from more than 600 in 1980 dropped to about 100 in 1966.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words complaint, noise, number, complaints with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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