The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main ifeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main ifeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table displays information about a bakery’s selling information contains
number
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a number
the number
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of
transaction
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transactions
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,
transaction
value, number of eat-in and take-away
transaction
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transactions
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, and
most
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the most
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popular item of each three different branches in Vancouver Street in 2015.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
Georgia
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the Georgia
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branch had the largest number
in
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of
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all means of
transaction
mentioned.
Moreover
, despite
of
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apply
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the fact that Drake had the least figure of transactions, it produced the second biggest
transaction
value compared to Dusmuir’s. In terms of the most popular
bakery's
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bakery
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branch, Georgia produced $10.69 and sold over 850 of its products in 2015 with Chicken Burger as the consumer’s
favorite
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favourite
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menu.
Moreover
, Drake made
slightly
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a slightly
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lower
transaction
value than Georgia’s by around $ 1.50 with 390 transactions and somehow surpassed
the
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Drake’s profit at %5.61
that
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which
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had more
figure
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figures
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of
transaction
of 854
order
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orders
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. These branches are known
with
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for
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its
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their
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popular
item
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items
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namely Chicken Wings and Chicken Pasta respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words transaction with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average sales
  • branch
  • location
  • performance
  • comparison
  • trends
  • sales figures
  • sales numbers
  • distribution
  • revenue
  • turnover
  • differences
  • similarities
  • sales performance
  • temporal patterns
  • fluctuations
  • highest
  • lowest
  • contributes to
  • unexpected trends
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