The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main ifeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table displays information about a bakery’s selling information contains
number
of Add an article
a number
the number
transaction
, Fix the agreement mistake
transactions
transaction
value, number of eat-in and take-away transaction
, and Fix the agreement mistake
transactions
most
popular item of each three different branches in Vancouver Street in 2015.
Correct article usage
the most
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that Georgia
branch had the largest number Correct article usage
the Georgia
in
all means of Change preposition
of
transaction
mentioned. Moreover
, despite of
the fact that Drake had the least figure of transactions, it produced the second biggest Change preposition
apply
transaction
value compared to Dusmuir’s.
In terms of the most popular bakery's
branch, Georgia produced $10.69 and sold over 850 of its products in 2015 with Chicken Burger as the consumer’s Change noun form
bakery
favorite
menu. Change the spelling
favourite
Moreover
, Drake made slightly
lower Correct article usage
a slightly
transaction
value than Georgia’s by around $ 1.50 with 390 transactions and somehow surpassed the
Drake’s profit at %5.61 Remove the article
apply
that
had more Correct pronoun usage
which
figure
of Fix the agreement mistake
figures
transaction
of 854 order
. These branches are known Fix the agreement mistake
orders
with
Change preposition
for
its
popular Correct pronoun usage
their
item
namely Chicken Wings and Chicken Pasta respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
items
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transaction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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