The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The present table compares data about the number of passengers who used 3 various massive German airports namely,
Dusseldorf
, Frankfurt
, and Berlin Tegel from 2007 to 2012.
Overall
, the main airport that people select
Wrong verb form
selected
it
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
Frankfurt
; thereafter
, the trend of both Dusseldorf
and Frankfurt
increased, but Dusseldorf
waved.
According to
the chart, the initially
choice of people for travel was Change the word
initial
Frankfurt
, and the number of traveler
were rising Change to a plural noun
travelers
during
5 years, for at the beginning the figures were 36.5 and in Change preposition
over
last
year amount
was 69.3 million. The second airport was Add an article
the amount
Dusseldorf
except 2010
and 2011 which had vacillations; Change preposition
in 2010
moreover
, started with 27.2; then
in 2009 touched
Correct word choice
and touched
the
peak Correct article usage
a
by
48.2 after that, Change preposition
of
the
number reduced to 45.6 in 2012.
The picture shows the third aim of people was Berlin Tegel Correct word choice
and the
that
in 2007 had 17.3 million. Later amount climbed to 43.3 in 2010; Correct word choice
which
however
, two other years (2011 and 2010) were absolutely the same as 2010
.Change preposition
in 2010
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dusseldorf, frankfurt with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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