The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The process diagram illustrates how instant

noodles

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are produced. The whole production process takes eight stages

for

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to

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completion

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complete

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.

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, it commenced

flour

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with flour

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been

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being

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stored in the

silo's

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silos

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and ends with labelling plus sealing and into the market. To start with, the flour is transferred into the storage

silo's

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silos

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and later into the mixer where water and soil are added

onto

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it. When mixing is done they're transferred to the

dough

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sheets after rollers

has

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been used to roll up the

dough

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. The production continues to the

dough

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stripes.

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, from the

dough

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stripes, they

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channeld

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channelled

changed

into a

noodles

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disc where cooking is done by oil and drying.

After

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this

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process

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process,

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the

dough

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is transferred into cups where vegetables and

noodles

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spices

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and spices

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are added to. The spice and

noodles

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in the cups are processed in the final stage for

labeling

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labelling

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and sealing,

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comes

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come

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out as

a

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apply

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complete

parkages

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package

packages

and

available

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are available

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in the markets, shops and supermarkets for buyers and sellers.