The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table charts shows financial data
sales
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for sales
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of two products ( coffee and bananas) between 1999 and 2004 in
UK
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the UK
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, DENMARK, SWEDEN, BELGIUM AND
SWITZERLAND
. the unit is measured in millions
in
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of
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euros
.
Overall
,
Switzerland
made the highest
sales
in
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of
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bananas in 2004 and
UK
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the UK
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has
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apply
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benefited the most from selling coffee in 1999.
To begin
with,
UK
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the UK
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sold 1.5million
euros
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of
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coffee in 1999 and rose to 20
millions
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million
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in 2004, There was
significant
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a significant
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increased
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increase
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.
Switzerland
sold 3
million
in 1999 with double
sales
in 2004 to 6
million
. Denmark and Belgium slightly
increase
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increased
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from 1.8 -2
million
and 1-1.7
million
euros
in 2004. Sweden did not show much profit from 0.8 to 1
million
which
worth
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is worth
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nothing. From the second table,
Switzerland
trippled
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tripled
it's
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its
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sales
from
15million
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15 million
to 47
million
in 2004 and earned the highest profit.
UK
Belgium made
minimum
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a minimum
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profit of 4
million
and 5.5
million
in 2004.
In contrast
, Denmark and Sweden Saw a decrease from 1.8
million
to 1
million
euros
and 2
million
euros
to 0.9
million
euros
respectively in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, uk, switzerland, euros, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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