The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table charts shows financial data coffee in 1999 and rose to 20
sales
of two products ( coffee and bananas) between 1999 and 2004 in Change preposition
for sales
UK
, DENMARK, SWEDEN, BELGIUM AND Correct article usage
the UK
SWITZERLAND
. the unit is measured in millions in
Change preposition
of
euros
.
Overall
, Switzerland
made the highest sales
in
bananas in 2004 and Change preposition
of
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
has
benefited the most from selling coffee in 1999.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
with, UK
sold 1.5million Correct article usage
the UK
euros
Change preposition
of
millions
in 2004, There was Change to singular
million
significant
Correct article usage
a significant
increased
. Replace the word
increase
Switzerland
sold 3 million
in 1999 with double sales
in 2004 to 6 million
. Denmark and Belgium slightly increase
from 1.8 -2 Wrong verb form
increased
million
and 1-1.7 million
euros
in 2004. Sweden did not show much profit from 0.8 to 1 million
which worth
nothing.
From the second table, Add a missing verb
is worth
Switzerland
trippled
Correct your spelling
tripled
it's
Replace the word
its
sales
from 15million
to 47 Correct your spelling
15 million
million
in 2004 and earned the highest profit. UK
Belgium made minimum
profit of 4 Add an article
a minimum
million
and 5.5 million
in 2004. In contrast
, Denmark and Sweden Saw a decrease from 1.8 million
to 1 million
euros
and 2 million
euros
to 0.9 million
euros
respectively in 2004.Submitted by priscillaagyeiwaaboahen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, uk, switzerland, euros, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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