The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Task 1
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The table showing the number of
hours
spent by housewives
on housework
from 1920 to 2019 shows interesting dynamics. In 1920, housewives
spent about 50 hours
a week
on housework
. However
, by 1940, this
time
had decreased to 30-40 hours
a week
. In such
a short period of time
, housewives
managed to reduce the time
spent on cleaning by almost 20 percent
. By 1960, the number of Change the spelling
per cent
hours
spent on housework
had decreased to 20 hours
a week
. It is interesting that in the period from 1980 to 2000, this
time
remained virtually unchanged. This
is due to
the fact that during this
period there were no technological changes that could simplify household chores. However
, by 2019, technological progress has made a significant step forward and the time
spent on housework
has decreased to 10 hours
a week
. In the future, this
time
will probably continue to decrease as technology does not stand still and continues to simplify the process of working on
home, which makes life much easier for Change preposition
at
housewives
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