Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Major
companies
frequently sponsor sports
events to advertise their goods. Some believe that this
development has a damaging impact on the spirit of sports
. Large companies
use sports
competition to develop their commodity that this
has positive effect to sport
also
has some negative impact on sports
.
Companies
advertise their product in sport
tourns that has benefits on sports
. Big companies
help to sports
to develop through to sponsor. If big company sponsor to sport
, this
sport
will develop. Also
across this
all expenses and sportman's salary pay on time. For example
: In the Ultimate Fighting Championship fighting sport
competiton Gorilla energy drink to sponsore all tourns. That's why Ultimate Fighting Championship was very developed nowadays. Across Gorilla company sportsman's get big salary from Fight and so they all pay attention this
sport
, get busy and develop more sport
tournament.
Large companies
advertise own product across sport
contention that has some minus side to sport
. Nowadays alcohol drink advertise big screen in the sport
competiton. Audience usually to taste this
product also
this
days sportsmens may taste this
kind of products. Through this
some Athletes have health problems. For instance
: Last
year Anvar G'ofurov In the Bunyodkor football club player diseased heart ilness. The reason for this
was that he consumed a lot of alcoholic beverages advertised by sponsors. The athlete left football, which was a great loss for the football team.
In conclusion, there are downsides to corporate sponsorship of sports
events, but it also
benefits the sport
financially.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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