Some countries have age 4 as a minimum requirement for admission into schools, whereas other countries believe that age 7 should be the minimum requirement. What is the situation in your country? What do you think is the right age to enter schooling?

Education indeed plays a crucial role in society.

However

, when children come

age

of four is the right

time

for school admissions in some nations

while

other countries believe that

kids

when turn

seven

that

time

only they should go to

schools

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. In my

country

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enrollment for new primary

student

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when they are turned

five

. I think the

age

of

seven

is the best

time

to enter

schools

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.

This

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

To begin

with, in my

country

have strict rules for

kids

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enrollment which is they should turn the

age

of

five

in

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the grounds before the

age

of

five

toddlers only concentrate on playing, so they cannot concentrate on their studies. That's why my

country

's education department imposed a strict law.

Furthermore

, the

age

of

seven

is the best

age

for children

enter

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into

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schools

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because before

seven

they are

kids

and they

could not

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tolerate

on

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studies pressure.

This

is the

age

of

seven

at that

time

children's brain function is progressing stage, so they can easily learn without facing any troubles.

For instance

, in Japan,

kids

should enter

in

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schools

when they turn

seven

, and

as a result

, the Japanese are the most

intelligence

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persons than other nations and numerous technological devices

found

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from

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this

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nations.

Therefore

, I think the

age

of

seven

is the most accurate

time

to

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infants enter

schools

. In conclusion, entering

schools

are the mandatory process of

humans

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lives

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. In my

country's

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infants should enter

schools

in

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the

age

of

five

because they can concentrate on

studies

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their studies

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. In my opinion, about

this

, toddlers should go to

schools

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when turning the

age

of

seven

on the grounds

this

is the progressing stage of the brain function, so they can learn easily.