The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given plans illustrate information about the transformation of a
harbour
from the year 2000 until now.
Overall
, the
harbour
witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being the addition and the replacement of some facilities. Looking
at
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the
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south of the
harbour
, there was the castle near a public beach in 2000,
however
, that was replaced by the new hotel and its private beach. The cafes and shops were erected next to the lifeboat at the moment. The area for the marina ( private yachts) at the moment was the place for fishing boats in 2000. The
harbour
also
has new showers and toilets which are located between two car parks nowadays. At the north side of
this
harbour
, the previous location for the fishing boats was replaced to make way for a new marina ( private yachts). There are two docks at the present time which means the second dock was constructed in the middle of the
harbour
. Especially, the car parks and lifeboats
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unchanged
from
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2000 until now
instead
of some replacements and additions.
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coherence cohesion
Reinforce the conclusion by summarising the main changes more explicitly.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the distinctions between different parts of the harbour are clear and avoid repetition.
task achievement
Elaborate slightly on how the changes have impacted the overall layout and functionality of the harbour.
task achievement
The essay effectively highlights the major changes in the harbour.
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Main points are adequately supported with relevant examples.
coherence cohesion
There is a logical progression of ideas and good use of comparative language.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harbour (or harbor)
  • docks
  • shipping lanes
  • warehouses
  • recreational areas
  • infrastructure
  • additions
  • removals
  • facilities
  • environmental sustainability
  • economic impact
  • local community
  • capacity
  • technological advancements
  • industrial shipping
  • recreational use
  • surrounding infrastructure
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