Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangement for hosting a party for one of your friend's. In your letter tell the manager about the reason for the party Explain what requirements you have As about the availability of facilities and the menu
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to make a request to arrange a party in your hotel on
next long weekend, and I think your hotel would be the best place to get all the amenities within a budget.
I am going to organise Change preposition
apply
this
function to celebrate my friends's
birthday party as we have separated since we finished our graduation, and now I am coming to surprise him on his birthday. Not only Fix the agreement mistake
friend's
this
, he has recently got promotion
, Add an article
a promotion
the promotion
therefore
, I think it would be a great time to hang out with him.
Since,
I trust you and Remove the comma
apply
leaving
everything Wrong verb form
leave
on
you, Change preposition
to
but
still I have some conditions for you especially in terms of Correct word choice
apply
seating
area, as we were Add an article
the seating
a seating
dissapointed
Correct your spelling
disappointed
last
time. Also
, I want separate
banquet hall Correct article usage
a separate
along with
proper air-conditioning as summer is approaching, and I would really appreciate your assistance in providing private parking.
I think your hotel already has well experienced
employees who are very welcoming and friendly, not only Add a hyphen
well-experienced
this
, one of my friends has told me about your breakfast meals which looks
Change the verb form
look
intruiging
, but still I would appreciate your help in providing me Correct your spelling
intriguing
updated
menu for all meals, and I cannot wait to attend Add an article
the updated
an updated
this
party with my friend, and I hope your services would not dissappoint
us.
I look forward to your response. Thank you in advance.
Yours Sincerely,
Amanjot Kaur.Correct your spelling
disappoint
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grammar
Your letter is quite effective, but some minor grammatical errors can make the text clearer. For instance, change 'friends's birthday' to 'friend's birthday.'
clarity
Try to avoid run-on sentences by breaking them into shorter sentences. This can make your writing easier to read. For example, break the sentence 'I think your hotel already has well-experienced employees...' into two sentences.
structure
The letter has a clear and logical structure, which makes it easy to follow your points.
task
You have successfully addressed all parts of the question, providing clear reasons for the party and your requirements.
tone
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for a formal request.
cohesion
You effectively use paragraphs to separate different ideas, enhancing readability.