You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph Explain why you need that particular photograph Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Brendan,
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See you soon, and good night
Nouf,
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logical structure
Enhance logical flow by clearly organizing the letter into paragraphs with distinct purposes, such as the reason for writing and the explanation of the photograph's importance.
single idea per paragraph
Ensure all sentences within a paragraph address a single idea to improve clarity.
complete response
Proofread for spelling and grammatical errors to make the letter cleaner and more professional.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is suitable and friendly, fitting the context of writing to a friend.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing provide a personal touch, reinforcing the friendly tone of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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