The chart below shows the literacy rates of three different continents between 1930 and 2000.
The line graph demonstrates the literacy rates of three different continents from 1930 to 2000. The continents represented are North
America
, Asia, and Africa.
One notable observation is that North America
remained high throughout the period
. At the beginning of the time period
, its literacy rate
was almost 70% and marked 80% in 2000. Even though this
didn’t experience any big changes over the course of the time period
, it showed always the highest record among continents.
It is also
noteworthy that the figure of Asia absolutely surged during this
period
. In 1930, its rate
comprised nearly
almost 40%, but surpassed 80% after 70 years, which became almost the same percentage Rephrase
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in
America
in 2000. In contrast
, Africa has had the lowest rate
during this
time. In 1930, its figure was only about 15% and just increased to 30% in 2000. This
continent showed even the growing rate
between 1940 and 1950 but was generally stagnant into 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
Asia’s literacy rate
skyrocketed from 1930 to 2000 and North America
showed always the highest percentage of it. However
, Africa exclusively experienced stable growth throughout the whole period
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