The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words. » You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for

manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The illustration above represents a table containing a global
market
information in the mobile phones industry. It includes both: the list of the large companies and its percentage of the trading for years 2005 and 2006
as well as
total part of the
market
for small competitors mentioned by name "Others" in the "Company" column records. Both leads to total of 100%. The graph consists of 3 columns: "Company", "2005 %
Market
share
", "2006 %
Market
share
". Clearly, it shows the names of the corporations and their
share
of the world trade for specified date. The
last
row in the table dedicated to bring the percent summary to a hundred percent.
Due to
the diagram, undoubtedly, the Nokia was the leading concern in 2005 and rose in 2006 even more.
However
, the BenQ Mobile owned a minor percent of the fair in 2005 among the named companies, even though, its
market
share
decreased in 2006. In summary,
according to
the provided data set, the global commerce of the lead companies is increasing,
whereas
that of the small businesses is diminishing.
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