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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » »

The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » »
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The illustration above represents a table containing a global
market
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 information in the mobile phones industry. It includes both: the list of the large companies and its percentage of the trading for years 2005 and 2006
as well as
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 total part of the
market
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 for small competitors mentioned by name "Others" in the "Company" column records. Both leads to total of 100%. The graph consists of 3 columns: "Company", "2005 %
Market
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share
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", "2006 %
Market
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share
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". Clearly, it shows the names of the corporations and their
share
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 of the world trade for specified date. The
last
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 row in the table dedicated to bring the percent summary to a hundred percent.
Due to
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 the diagram, undoubtedly, the Nokia was the leading concern in 2005 and rose in 2006 even more.
However
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, the BenQ Mobile owned a minor percent of the fair in 2005 among the named companies, even though, its
market
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share
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 decreased in 2006. In summary,
according to
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 the provided data set, the global commerce of the lead companies is increasing,
whereas
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 that of the small businesses is diminishing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words market, share with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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