The table below shows the population (in millions)of 8 countries in 2008 and 2018 . It also shows the percentage growth in population between these two dates

The table below shows the population (in millions)of 8 countries in 2008 and 2018 . It also shows the percentage growth in population between these two dates
The table given compares the
number of
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population
in 8 different countries including the percentage
growth
between two
years
in 2008 and 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen that Brazil was the most populated country in the first period studied.
Nevertheless
, it was Angola which had the biggest
number of
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population
growth
throughout the
years
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despite the fact that the
number
of its
population
still
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lower than Nigeria as the second biggest
population
growth
producer. Regarding the country with the highest
number
of people, Brazil started at 194
million
in 2008 and 208
million
in 2018, for the span of 10
years
it
was
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only produced 7% of
population
growth
. Compared with Nigeria and Pakistan
that
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stood at 128
million
and 173
million
in 2008 respectively, and
made
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28%
for
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Nigeria and 21%
for
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Pakistan
and
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contributed almost the same
number of
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population
as Brazil in 2018. Despite the biggest
growth
number
, Angola still had a lower
number
of people
by
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only 9 births
occurred
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as well as
Canada with only 4 babies
were
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born. In terms of depopulation, Russia had no record of birth and stayed at 143
million
people in 10
years
.
However
, Japan and Romania saw a slight decrease in their
population
from 128
million
to 126
million
for Japan, and 20
million
to 19
million
for Romania.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, population, growth, years, million with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic changes
  • standout statistics
  • magnitude of change
  • economic expansion
  • improved healthcare
  • aging population
  • emigration
  • regional patterns
  • anomalies
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  • governance
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