The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one scocial centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period of 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one scocial centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period of 2000 to 2020.
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This
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line chart depicts statistics of the total
number
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of
participants
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in some
activities
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at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 until 2020.
Firstly
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, the film club had the highest
number
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of
participants
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among the others over the years with the
number
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constantly above 60
persons
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people
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, which figures were far higher than the rest of the
activities
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. Martial arts had a steady
number
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of
participants
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over the years, higher than 30 but lower than 40. Despite that, amateur dramatics dropped constantly since 2005.
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, many things happened in 2010. Table tennis
participants
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started to increase significantly in that year until it reached its peak at approximately 50
participants
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and it was left far above the other
activities
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except film club which was still the most anticipated activity. At the same time, new musical performance
activities
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whose initial
number
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was above 10.
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, the amateur dramatics still continued to drop until 2020 with the least and the
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number
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at around 5 persons.
To conclude
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, the film club had the highest
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of
participants
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among the others over the years compared to table tennis experienced a significant jump constantly since 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, participants, activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participants
  • social centre
  • comparison
  • trends
  • consistently popular
  • gained popularity
  • lost popularity
  • community interest
  • availability of facilities
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • external events
  • economic downturns
  • health crises
  • demographic changes
  • aging population
  • marketing
  • community outreach programs
  • participation rates
  • Melbourne
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