The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one scocial centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period of 2000 to 2020.
This
line chart depicts statistics of the total number
of participants
in some activities
at a social centre in Melbourne, Australia from 2000 until 2020.
Firstly
, the film club had the highest number
of participants
among the others over the years with the number
constantly above 60 persons
, which figures were far higher than the rest of the Replace the word
people
activities
. Martial arts had a steady number
of participants
over the years, higher than 30 but lower than 40. Despite that, amateur dramatics dropped constantly since 2005.
Secondly
, many things happened in 2010. Table tennis participants
started to increase significantly in that year until it reached its peak at approximately 50 participants
and it was left far above the other activities
except film club which was still the most anticipated activity. At the same time, new musical performance activities
whose initial number
was above 10. Lastly
, the amateur dramatics still continued to drop until 2020 with the least and the last
number
at around 5 persons.
To conclude
, the film club had the highest number
of participants
among the others over the years compared to table tennis experienced a significant jump constantly since 2010.Submitted by kelly on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, participants, activities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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