The two maps below show access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The two maps illustrate the transformations of an access

road

to a

City

Hospital in 2007 and in 2010. In 2007, the entrance to the

City

Hospital was connected to the

City

Road

by an intersection, where the Hospital

Road

was located. The

car

park

used by staff and the public was located to the east of Hospital

Road

Moreover

, the

road

branches out into a Ring

Road

, which surrounds the

City

Hospital.

On the other hand

, in 2010, access to the hospital from the

City

Road

was connected by a roundabout.

This

path branches out to the bus station and the previously stated Hospital

Road

Furthermore

, the previously mentioned

car

park

was converted into a staff-only

car

park

; what is more, the public

car

park

was moved to the east of the Ring

Road

surrounding the

City

Hospital.

To conclude

, access to the

City

Hospital has become more intricate in 2010 compared to 2007, which makes it more modern and accessible.

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