The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
given
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compare
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the
number
of journal
articles
readers per
week
at an Australian university. Unit is measured in percentage.
Overall
, it
clearly seen
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is clearly seen
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that PhD
students
read more than junior lecturers did in one
week
.
Moreover
, despite having the largest
number
in
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of
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reading fewer
articles
,
students
still
shown
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showed
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evenly
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an evenly
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spread in
number
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a number
the number
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of
articles
they read compared to the others. Regarding the largest
number
of journal
articles
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article
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readers, about 80% of PhD
students
read more than 12 journal
articles
and only a-fifth of them read less than 11
of
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journal
articles
in a
week
. Compared to junior lecturers, about a third-quarter read 6 to 10 journal
articles
in seven days. In terms of the lowest
number
of journal
articles
readers, about 67% of
students
read less than 5 journal
articles
, about
a-fifth
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a fifth
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of them read 6 to 11 journal
articles
, and the rest
at
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12% read more than 12 journal
articles
per
week
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, articles, week, students with synonyms.
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