The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate
exports
from
Vietnam
to the US and from the US to
Vietnam
.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the major export from
Vietnam
to the US is coffee, and from the US to
Vietnam
is aircraft parts.
However
, the smallest percentage of
exports
from
Vietnam
to the US are garments and other goods
as well as
from the US to
Vietnam
are cars,
According to
what is shown, the size of export for coffee from
Vietnam
to the US is the biggest among all
exports
,
it accounts
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for 23 $
million
,
while
fruit and vegetables
exports
are less than coffee
exports
by $ 7
million
. The amount of Seafood, Rice, garments and other goods together is $12.7
million
.
However
, for
exports
from the US to
Vietnam
, the size of aircraft parts
exports
is $ 72
million
, which is the largest part among all
exports
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, vietnam, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • import/export balance
  • sector
  • percentage
  • relative importance
  • comparative analysis
  • similarities and differences
  • noteworthy
  • primary sector
  • secondary sector
  • contribute
  • overall export profile
  • main features
  • summarize
  • context
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