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29.The bar chart shows the average class size in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

29.The bar chart shows the average class size in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart compares the number of
students
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 in each class in primary and lower secondary schools and compares to the world average in 2006, in 6 various countries.
Overall
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, South Korea had the highest average of
students
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 in both categories,
while
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, Iceland had the lowest number of
students
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 in the class. South Korea had
average
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an average
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nearly
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of nearly
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 37
students
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 in primary schools, followed by 33 in lower secondary schools. In Japan,
this
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 figure fell to around 31 and 27 average
students
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 in class in both categories, respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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