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The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011.
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The given pie charts compare the amount of
waste
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 discarded in 1960 and 2011 in one territory.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 the largest proportion of
waste
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 disposed was for paper in both years,
while
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 the percentage for glass fell over time. As the chart reveals, the greatest proportion of
waste
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 disposal was for paper, which represented 25% in 1960 and 15% in 2011.In both years, 9% of
waste
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 was allocated to glass, and
similarly
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, 5% of
waste
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 was allocated to green
waste
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 in each year,respectively.In 1960, the smallest quantity of
waste
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 disposal was for wood, at just 4%.
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this
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 percentage doubled to 8% in 2011.Turning to plastic, it accounted for around 8% in 1960 and rose to 18% in 2011.
By contrast
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, the figure for food was exactly double at 12% in 1960 and 21% in 2011.Meanwhile,the points for other items showed 12% and 4%, in turn.Regarding textiles, they represented 17% in 1960 and 11% in 2011.
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, the percentage for metal was nearly the same at 8% in 1960 and 9% in 2011.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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