The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart presents a comparison data of weekly income divided into 8 categories. Generally,
people
in 1968 had spent higher than in 2018 on primary necessities Use synonyms
such
asLinking Words
:
food, clothing and footwear, personal Remove the comma
apply
goods
, and fuel and power. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, in 2018, Linking Words
people
tended to spend their money more on leisure activities, housing, and transportation. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, household Linking Words
goods
outcomes were exactly the same both in 1968 and 2018.
In the year Use synonyms
of
1968, nourishment had been the most household consumption to pay which recorded 35% of their weekly earnings. Surprisingly, Change preposition
apply
people
in 2018 only spent 17% of their wages to buy food, it had almost a half percentage of degradation. Apparel’s reduction Use synonyms
also
has experienced the same constraint. Linking Words
People
lack Use synonyms
of
interest Remove the preposition
apply
to buy
clothes or shoes which showed a depreciation from 10% to 5% in 50 years. Change preposition
in buying
Although
personal Linking Words
goods
had only taken 8% of family wages in 1968, it Use synonyms
also
has been facing derivation to 4% in 2018. Fuel and power have slightly deflated from 7% to 4% over 50 years.
Vacation has been the ultimate cost of Linking Words
people
in 2018, which significantly had been increasing from less than 10% to 22% within the 50-year length of time. Housing payments had Use synonyms
also
been facing 9% inflation. The Linking Words
last
, transportation Linking Words
also
had an ascension from 8% to 14% of income.
Linking Words
However
, household Linking Words
goods
had surprisingly recorded the same percentage over 50 years, which recorded 8% of family weekly earnings.Use synonyms
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