The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart presents a comparison data of weekly income divided into 8 categories. Generally,
people
in 1968 had spent higher than in 2018 on primary necessities such
as:
food, clothing and footwear, personal Remove the comma
apply
goods
, and fuel and power. On the contrary
, in 2018, people
tended to spend their money more on leisure activities, housing, and transportation. Nevertheless
, household goods
outcomes were exactly the same both in 1968 and 2018.
In the year of
1968, nourishment had been the most household consumption to pay which recorded 35% of their weekly earnings. Surprisingly, Change preposition
apply
people
in 2018 only spent 17% of their wages to buy food, it had almost a half percentage of degradation. Apparel’s reduction also
has experienced the same constraint. People
lack of
interest Remove the preposition
apply
to buy
clothes or shoes which showed a depreciation from 10% to 5% in 50 years. Change preposition
in buying
Although
personal goods
had only taken 8% of family wages in 1968, it also
has been facing derivation to 4% in 2018. Fuel and power have slightly deflated from 7% to 4% over 50 years.
Vacation has been the ultimate cost of people
in 2018, which significantly had been increasing from less than 10% to 22% within the 50-year length of time. Housing payments had also
been facing 9% inflation. The last
, transportation also
had an ascension from 8% to 14% of income.
However
, household goods
had surprisingly recorded the same percentage over 50 years, which recorded 8% of family weekly earnings.Submitted by yxxs on
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