The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map compares three different sites which are under scrutiny for vacation area plans, namely areas A, B, and
C
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that C
and B are the most beneficial place for the future vacation area plan compared to A which is an industrial area that might affect future citizen's health.
In terms of suitable places, C
and B are considered to be the most acceptable areas. The former serves with the beauty of its natural landscapes and calm environment, making it therapeutic for people who love the undisturbed environment and slow-living culture. The latter gives access to various public facilities and infrastructures which help people in their daily activities such
as malls, gyms, and various public transportation that improve citizens' quality of life.
On the other hand
, C
might be the last
place to choose for this
plan. The busy environment and pollution are the reasons. Besides
the health risks, it can also
put residents in a dangerous situation for being near to manufactures
.Correct your spelling
manufacturers
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